Originally Posted by
Dave Humphries
Hi Jimmy,
#1 quite busy and the top is missing (as was discussed in the first thread), also the background on left ends too soon
#2 busy again, but I get the connection, for me the bottle divides the shot in two because central and tall
#3 Not sure of the relevance of the box, I guess it is what the bottle was in, but the comparative distances and angle of view have made it look so tiny, that 'connection' is lost. I'd have left a few more pixels above the neck of the bottle and a bit less empty space on the right.
#4 I'd have taken this one with three things in, e.g. stopper out - you just can't win can you? :D
Not sure the minimalist composition suits the aspect ratio and I find the torch's reflector pattern on the wall a distraction in this one (although it suited well in #2)
I can't see any EXIF, but if you are using a tripod and could do a long exposure, you could try waving the torch during say a second (or longer) exposure to see what effect that has, be a bit hit and miss at first I suspect, but practice makes perfect.
Can you number them all next time you add one please?
All the best,