cracked ISO 100,f/16,1/100 sec,18mm. straightened in raw,cropped in cs3
Hi Ron, Great... Now your really on your way !! Looks like we are going to have a part creative and part documentary with this project, OK? All 3 pictures are a bit too close, that's OK if we have an "establishment-shot" - a wide overall view of what is going on. Then add 2-3 additional support picture giving details and emotions of the establishment picture. Otherwise we just get a: "well that's a nice picture of bricks and steel bars, but what is the point", no text allowed just yet, captions will come later. So, shoot wide, then move in with a 3 set of support pics showing details and the story. Try and have a know size object in the pic for a guide to size perspective. Tech details are not important, OK just images that tell me what you see and what you feel. Walk around the project area for a while and really get to know the subjects - before you shoot. This will help to avoid "snap-shots" and being uninteresting. Good start, lets try again
