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12th November 2012, 09:54 AM
#1
The storm has gone:
Hi,
I shot this one after a thunder storm. My feeling is there is something missing in the image. What have I missed? Does it have any impact? Does it tell a story?
Please any C & C will be appreciated.
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12th November 2012, 11:06 AM
#2
Re: The storm has gone:
Hi Andre
In my very humble (and newbie) opinion it lacks a focus (or subject if you prefer) point for the eye.
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12th November 2012, 02:00 PM
#3
Re: The storm has gone:
Hi, Andre
I think Steve is right. You have a very nice sky with great colors and clouds, but you just happened to see it when you werent facing a compelling landscape- both the water and land mass are relatively featureless. This goes into the "almost" category, methinks
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12th November 2012, 06:09 PM
#4
Re: The storm has gone:
Thanks guys,
Maybe I should clone a monster into the foreground.
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12th November 2012, 06:10 PM
#5
Re: The storm has gone:
Maybe try a crop from the bottom to reduce the amount of sea; perhaps half of the current width, and a similar amount from the left side to retain the same size ratio.
I suspect this will concentrate more on the sky which is the main subject.
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