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28th May 2013, 09:17 AM
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Kiwi Fruit with a reflection
I wanted to try get a nice Image of this fruit with some great reflections to add symmetry, how do you think I did?
Kiwi.1 by Tobias Weber, on Flickr
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28th May 2013, 09:56 AM
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Re: Kiwi Fruit with a reflection
I think you did very well with the reflection and the colour is great.
I'm wondering though if all the black space on the left adds anything to the image.
I tried a 8x10 crop and that put the centre of the front top kiwi right on the rule of thirds cross point.
Maybe a little more room top and bottom might be something to try if the original was larger.
Very nice
Cheers, Greg
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28th May 2013, 12:58 PM
#3
Re: Kiwi Fruit with a reflection
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28th May 2013, 01:02 PM
#4
Re: Kiwi Fruit with a reflection
You did very well!!! It looks a little over-sharp to me but well executed.
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28th May 2013, 09:58 PM
#5
Re: Kiwi Fruit with a reflection
I think it is a great effort, too Toby. I don't know anything about studio lighting and I wonder if it would be possible to eliminate the ghosting around the bottom of the reflection
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28th May 2013, 11:12 PM
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Re: Kiwi Fruit with a reflection
Looks good to me Tobias.
Seems like you are about to the end of your focus with the back of the back piece just as an observation.
I would also mention the double reflection or “ghosting”.
Just out of curiosity, what is your reflective base?
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28th May 2013, 11:13 PM
#7
Re: Kiwi Fruit with a reflection
As others have already said - a beautiful image, well planned and executed.
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29th May 2013, 05:35 AM
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Re: Kiwi Fruit with a reflection
Thank you everyone. I only had one Speedlite with a home made snoot on it to light the fruit from the left. To get some detail on the right I used a desk lamp. The reflective surface is just a piece of Glass that I found lying around. I think because its a fairly thick piece of glass that might be the reason for the Ghosting. The focus going soft toward the back was actually done on purpose. I wanted the focus to mainly be on the front of the fruit.
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