Originally Posted by
rawill
I think this one is quite good.
Riders in focus, first horse head in focus, rear horse trying to catch first horse, space to run into, and first horse completely off the ground.
Rear horse rear is cut off, but in this case not quite so important as the first horse is the main subject.
Or is it? depends on your own subjective view.
Perhaps the pole is a bit distracting, but this is sometimes the issue. These shots are not posed, not time to remove "twigs etc".
Except in PP! and like you I want the shot as close to right first.
However, look at this shot, and compared with the one you put in the link.
I think the one in the link has a real sense of event, whereas this one is kind of like "in a bare paddock".
Lots of my motorsport practice shots are "bare paddock shots", taken on race days when there are very few spectator vehicles in the background to my favorite spot. Just the way it is sometimes.