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    Re: Lonely statue

    Thank you very much David


    Quote Originally Posted by deetheturk View Post
    Hi Binnur, i'm late to your thread but i think this crop works best for me, well done bud

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    Re: Lonely statue

    Quote Originally Posted by Mike Buckley View Post
    ..............The more I review all the versions, the more I think all of them would be stronger if you simply changed the caption. The scene really isn't about the statue, at least not for me. It's about the lamp lighting the statue in a way that speaks to their relationship; the lamp is taking care of the statue. Indeed, rather than the statue being lonely, the statue has company.
    Just woken up to this (literally) and my first thought was the same as Mike's comment. The title emphasises the statue but the lamps cry for some attention as well. As a whole, the last version makes a good image evoking the feeling of stillness in the early hours and I like it.

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    Re: Lonely statue

    Thank you John I will have to improve my skills for writing titles .

    Quote Originally Posted by John 2 View Post
    Just woken up to this (literally) and my first thought was the same as Mike's comment. The title emphasises the statue but the lamps cry for some attention as well. As a whole, the last version makes a good image evoking the feeling of stillness in the early hours and I like it.

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