Last edited by juznobsrvr; 20th July 2014 at 01:27 AM. Reason: Per Binnur, Donald and Manfred. Thanks for your input.
Your work capturing people is inspiring.
nice shot Rob...i see you are in chino, i'm down the street in corona.nice to meet you neighbor
Dedric
Good environmental portrait, Rob, but I think the background is too bright. The upper two thirds of the face is brighter than the lower third (skin/dark beard), and is 'divided' about the level of the mouth. In the background the bottom of the row of bright vertical stripes forms another bright horizontal line that just about coincides with the level of the mouth. So, all this gives the effect of a horizontal line running across the image and through the face.
If you pull the highlights down in the background I think you can overcome much of this and give the image more depth.
Nicely captured.
Hi Rob . He looks so straight at me that although there are some bright parts in the BG I'm not distracted by them. There are two bright circles on the lower left side, you might as well tone them down but I wouldn't touch any other thing in the image , it looks great this way
Very nice shot!
A beauty. Only suggestion would be about those two bright spots at the lower left-hand corner. Worth darkening them up a bit?
I find that the bright background works in this image, as the light areas mirror the lighting on your subject's face. I would go with Donald's suggestion as the bright spots on the bottom left really do add unwanted competition to the subject (i.e. the draw our eyes away from the subject).
That being said, another fine image; both compositionally and the way you handled the B&W conversion.
Wonderful shot but those glowing eyes at the bottom left distract me.
Thanks to all for noticing and constructive comments.