Bhimtal Lake from Mobile - C&C Welcome

[fotugraphy]

Hi, going forward on my photography venture I stopped and clicked another shot. Can you please review it and let me know what exactly is missing for it to make it much better?

I have clicked this image from my mobile phone (Note 2) and processed it in Photoshop. The climate was not very good for a dramatic lighting, so i tried to frame and give contrast using plants and flowers. I really like the curved frame and i deliberately kept that architecture in the lake off center.

Please provide your views and suggestion with composition and processing.

Thank You

PS : Please click on the image for lightbox screen view (Highly recommended).



Update 1: Removed Twigs and added some blues to remove yellow over tones and fix little tilt towards right.


Update 2 : Remove boats

[Kodiak]

A very decent shot, Raj!

Good composition (except the twig in upper right corner) well framed with
the flowery foreground. I see two issues: the WB (yellow over-tones) and
the horizon tilts a tad on the right.

[fotugraphy]

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A very decent shot, Raj!

Good composition (except the twig in upper right corner) well framed with
the flowery foreground. I see two issues: the WB (yellow over-tones) and
the horizon tilts a tad on the right.

Thanks a lot for your kind review and suggestions. I have updated the description with the changes as suggested.

[Shadowman]

Raj,

Nicely done, from a distance the two ships, almost centered in the frame, look like dashes and are too dark in tone. I would remove or lighten their tone similar to the others.

[fotugraphy]

Raj,

Nicely done, from a distance the two ships, almost centered in the frame, look like dashes and are too dark in tone. I would remove or lighten their tone similar to the others.

Thanks for your valuable review and suggestion. I have update the description with the suggested change.

[Kodiak]

Raj,

Nicely done, from a distance the two ships, almost centered in the frame, look like dashes and are too dark in tone. I would remove or lighten their tone similar to the others.

IMO, they either should all be removed (not the best idea!) or all stay there as
they are elements of real life events in the picture. A photograph has to tell a
story and the boats are part of the story and, as such, override any aesthetic
consideration. Just an opinion.

[bnnrcn]

Hi Raj, very nice image I agree with Kodiak about the boats.

[fotugraphy]

Hi Raj, very nice image I agree with Kodiak about the boats.

Thanks for your kind review and suggestion

[Wavelength]

I liked the image for its composition

[ied]

Beautiful image. I too love the composition.
Irene

[ShaneS]

Nice shot Raj, and I agree with others that the boast need to stay

[fotugraphy]

I liked the image for its composition

Thanx a lot for ur kind review n appreciation

[fotugraphy]

Beautiful image. I too love the composition.
Irene

Thanks for ur valuable review and appreciation.

[fotugraphy]

Nice shot Raj, and I agree with others that the boast need to stay

Thanx a lot for kind review and suggestion

[nimitzbenedicto]

Hi Raj,

Awesome what you produced with your celcam.

I'd rather stay with the original. I like it.

Thanks

[fotugraphy]

Hi Raj,

Awesome what you produced with your celcam.

I'd rather stay with the original. I like it.

Thanks

thanks for your kind review and suggestion. M glad you like it