I like version 3 of the original composition best. I often find that the critique of over sharpness is remedied by reducing the contrast. I don't add much sharpening to my raw images and yet I'm also critiqued with over sharpness. Another cause of the appearance of over sharpness is due to the amount of Clarity used in PP. I'm finding I use Clarity very little now in my landscapes. Just my $0.02 or is that 2p or 2d?