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    Re: Projection of myself

    Melania, I like the tone and mood of this shot. For me though I think it might benefit from a little reduction in brightness to emphasise the waves, reduce the glare towards the sun and bring out the clouds slightly more.

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    Quote Originally Posted by James G View Post
    Melania, I like the tone and mood of this shot. For me though I think it might benefit from a little reduction in brightness to emphasise the waves, reduce the glare towards the sun and bring out the clouds slightly more.
    I agree with this comment. I might also add that perhaps there is too much sky, and there's nothing there. I would crop some of it. I like the shot.

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    Melania,

    You're really prodding me with that title and accompanying image. Makes me think you see yourself traveling alone in a vast wasteland, in a changed world, where there is little to comfort you except your thoughts. Nice use of conversion and light/darks to convey a mood.

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    Re: Projection of myself

    Like John, your title intrigues me and made me stop and look again - always a good sign.
    As with Ernesto and James, I think there is perhaps too much sky, or is there detail in there you could bring out ? I am always surprised how much detail you can find in what seems a blank sky.
    Last edited by Kaye Leggett; 7th February 2015 at 04:53 PM. Reason: correct typo

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