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    Re: Old lady

    Nice framing.

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    Re: Old lady

    Nice image. I would crop the building on the left for a better composition. Also, the lady would stand out more this way.

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    Re: Old lady

    As Binnur suggested...the left building should go as well as cloning the draping rope thingy away.
    Also, the title does display, to phrase it delicately...crass.

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    Re: Old lady

    I find the three wheel assist interesting as I have only seen four wheel versions here.
    With the title telling us to concentrate of the 'old lady' I would turn it into a vertical image by cropping the youth and the left doorway .. plus a horizontal flip would aid the resulting composition .... placing the dark area on right of frame. But that depends on if you wish a documentary or artistic image.
    Old lady
    Putting the background out of focus I think subdues the interference of the rope or whatever it is ..partly cloned out over the brickwork but really too hard and complex a job over the background. The original would be better titled 'Old and Young' or something along those lines?
    Edit I think it needs a border
    Last edited by jcuknz; 1st March 2015 at 09:30 PM.

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    Re: Old lady

    I like the PP you have done. Sort of a sepia but, not really. Could you share how you did this?

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    Re: Old lady

    Nice image Melania. I do agree that John's edit draws the eye more to the lady... Nice work both of you!

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    Re: Old lady

    Quote Originally Posted by jcuknz View Post
    I find the three wheel assist interesting as I have only seen four wheel versions here.
    With the title telling us to concentrate of the 'old lady' I would turn it into a vertical image by cropping the youth and the left doorway .. plus a horizontal flip would aid the resulting composition .... placing the dark area on right of frame. But that depends on if you wish a documentary or artistic image.
    Old lady
    Putting the background out of focus I think subdues the interference of the rope or whatever it is ..partly cloned out over the brickwork but really too hard and complex a job over the background. The original would be better titled 'Old and Young' or something along those lines?
    Edit I think it needs a border
    Wow! How did you rotated the lady?

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    Re: Old lady

    Quote Originally Posted by rpcrowe View Post
    I like the PP you have done. Sort of a sepia but, not really. Could you share how you did this?
    Thanks! Yes sure: I use Camera Raw and I like to change colours form the panel

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