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[Melanie90]

[Dave Humphries]

Hi Melania,

Were you hoping for some critique?

You have not said.

I appreciate English may not be your first language, but it really would help us (to help you), if you took the trouble to follow the advice in the first post in this thread How to Get Effective Feedback for your Posted Images

I will offer my thoughts, but please understand that as you have told us nothing, I have no idea whether what I suggest was possible (or not). Nor do I know how pleased you are with it - which in turn means you might be discouraged by opinion below.


As a composition, this does not work for me, there are many elements which, with a little more thought and a repositioning of the camera before the shutter was clicked, I feel could have been improved.

The less you say, the less interested other members will be in trying to help you - so; please tell us something more about the image.

Thank you, Dave

[Shadowman]

Interesting shot, there are some good elements/subjects within, however this particular composition lacks energy; perhaps that's your intention; especially as you chose not to title your shot? I think the stairwell and graffiti is the main subject of this image; where does it lead to, what does it look like inside; what did the graffiti artist try to convey?

[shreds]

It screams desolation, decay and abandonment to me and I think there are a number of viewpoints in this shot which could have made it really interesting.

Dicci di più, Melania. (I think is correct).

[bnnrcn]

The image represents abandonment to me. And may be the graffiti has some connection with past. Anyway , it certainly moves me.

[JohnRostron]

I agree with Ian and Binnur. It really does have an impact on me.

John