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    Jess in the studio

    Transitioning from my macro work to portrait work.. Very different animal taking photos of people. Jess is the
    best. Had to include my doggies in one of them.

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    Re: Jess in the studio

    I am not a portrait expert Travis but I like the poses of this lady. I do not particularly like your background though. I like the last one best. I should have chosen #2 too but the background needs tidying...

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    Re: Jess in the studio

    Nice efforts, a few are a bit soft on focus; but perhaps that was your intentions. 2nd image is my favorite.

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    Re: Jess in the studio

    Gotta agree with Izzie. The backgrounds are not for my taste. Like the poses though.

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    Re: Jess in the studio

    Nice work Travis, but I will have to agree with Izzie, the backdrops are not working for me either. I find them rather distracting. A roll of seamless rather than a cloth drape would work a lot better for you.

    As for the shots you've taken, they well executed and most of the things I might point out are quite niggly details.

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    Re: Jess in the studio

    Nice series Travis, I agree about the backdrop, but I'm sure the lovely Jess will pose for you again

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    Re: Jess in the studio

    Very nice images Travis, I like them all

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    Re: Jess in the studio

    I thought that the profile shot might look nice in a B&W conversion (Jess would look nice in any form) so I tried it with this result...
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    Re: Jess in the studio

    I prefer the B&W version to the color , although Jess looks beautiful in all images


    Quote Originally Posted by rpcrowe View Post
    I thought that the profile shot might look nice in a B&W conversion (Jess would look nice in any form) so I tried it with this result...
    Jess in the studio

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    Re: Jess in the studio

    The B&W conversion looks good Richard, but I find the vignette a bit heavy-handed. I use vignettes in most of my images and I try to dial them back so that they are barely (if at all) noticeable. I think the shot needs one to keep the viewer's eyes from running off the edges.

    For me, it's close, but the B&W wins by a hair!

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    Re: Jess in the studio

    Thanks for the comments and suggestions.. Richard, I have been working on black and white conversions of these shots...you are so right that they look better in monochrome.

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