Lotus Pond - C & C are welcome

[Tejal]

I have tried to capture some candid moment at a lotus pond. Some of those I am sharing herewith you all. The boy in these pictures was gathering lotus from the pond. There was one more boy also. Along with him also, I have captured some moments, which I will share with you all in coming days.

Kindly share your C & C for improvement.

Thank you,

Tejal

IMG_4993 as Smart Object-1 by Tejal Imagination, on Flickr

IMG_4982 as Smart Object-1 by Tejal Imagination, on Flickr

IMG_4972 as Smart Object-1 by Tejal Imagination, on Flickr

[IzzieK]

Tejal...what is this kid doing? Did you ask him to pose for you in this pond? Or is he gathering some lotus for some offerings or something? I wish you included a narrative as to what he is doing...your shots are good and sharp and good bokeh. I am just curious as to why this boy is in the pond...

[Tejal]

Tejal...what is this kid doing? Did you ask him to pose for you in this pond? Or is he gathering some lotus for some offerings or something? I wish you included a narrative as to what he is doing...your shots are good and sharp and good bokeh. I am just curious as to why this boy is in the pond...

Yes, that boy was gathering lotus from the pond. I have not told him to pose. Ok...I am writing narration along with my shots on the top. Thanks Izzie

[chauncey]

Tejal, you need to work the concept a bit more. Think about this...capture a close-up of a
blossom with the boy reaching for it, showing only his hand and the flower.

[Tejal]

Tejal, you need to work the concept a bit more. Think about this...capture a close-up of a
blossom with the boy reaching for it, showing only his hand and the flower.

Thanks for your valuable suggestion. Actually the boy was far. But if i get an opportunity, I will surely try close up shots too, next time .