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21st November 2015, 11:36 AM
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Dawn, Docks & Dogs
The sun has finally shown its face again, so I headed down to the beach... not much going on but managed to get these two shots and applied some artistic licence to them.
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Thanks for viewing.
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21st November 2015, 11:57 AM
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Re: Dawn, Docks & Dogs
Simply Great... to choose one i go for the first
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21st November 2015, 12:15 PM
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Re: Dawn, Docks & Dogs
Nice set, both have their merits, I think the dog appears as a speck so should be either cloned out or image should be cropped. Although small in size; the human figure is easily recognized and works well in the full sized composition. The other image stands on its own, a lot of foreground that doesn't contribute much to the composition, however the slanting tonal change prevents too much boredom. However a crop just below the tonal change would work just as well.
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21st November 2015, 12:30 PM
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Re: Dawn, Docks & Dogs
That first image is a beauty. Wonderful PP.
Dave
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21st November 2015, 01:01 PM
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Re: Dawn, Docks & Dogs
..and your signature is stylish without distracting
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21st November 2015, 01:13 PM
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Re: Dawn, Docks & Dogs
Really nice. Especially like the first one because of the added interest of the walker and his dog.
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21st November 2015, 02:19 PM
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Re: Dawn, Docks & Dogs
Thanks all
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21st November 2015, 02:42 PM
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Re: Dawn, Docks & Dogs
both nice Matt, I feel that the dog gives the guy? a reason to be in the center of the image. I don't need to see the details of the dog to know what is going on.
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21st November 2015, 06:29 PM
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21st November 2015, 07:01 PM
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Re: Dawn, Docks & Dogs
I would zap the dog. It is too far away from its owner and too indistinct so just adds distraction.
Or alternatively; 'move it' closer to the owner so they are both walking towards the sun. There are a few faint trails in the sky which I would clone out.
The second image works fine as it is now.
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21st November 2015, 10:08 PM
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22nd November 2015, 10:41 AM
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23rd November 2015, 01:33 AM
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Re: Dawn, Docks & Dogs
No, this time I am going against you, Geoff. Sorry..I like that shot very much...it is a nice scene and the human/dog element add to the composition.
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