"Memorial Chorten" At - Thimphu, Bhutan - C&C are welcome !!!

[Tejal]

Your valuable C&C will be highly appreciated.

Regards,

Tejal

IMG_0447 as Smart Object-1 by Tejal Imagination, on Flickr

[Shadowman]

Nicely captured, I would crop out the pole on the left and the bit of yellow flag on the right upper portion.

[Tejal]

Nicely captured, I would crop out the pole on the left and the bit of yellow flag on the right upper portion.

Thanks a lot John for your feedback.

yes.. 4X3 crop is looking very nice. I already tried that . Here actually the railings which are going towards the bottom end on both the side and the peak of the stupa is coming in center. If i change the crop then it is disturbing the balance. Pics of both the kings are coming either on the extreme end side or the peak is not coming in center or the railing's symmetry is getting disturbed. or may be..... I am missing something.....

[Dave Humphries]

Hi Tejal,

You have some uncorrected lateral CA (Chromatic Aberration) in this shot.

I agree with John about losing the foreground almost out of shot fags and poles.

I see no reason why you cannot maintain the symmetry by cropping some off both sides - admittedly, this would make it a non-standard aspect ratio, but I only see that as an issue if you are intending to print, or display a whole series from same place. Well, that's what I'd do.

HTH, Dave

[Tejal]

Hi Tejal,

You have some uncorrected lateral CA (Chromatic Aberration) in this shot.

I agree with John about losing the foreground almost out of shot fags and poles.

I see no reason why you cannot maintain the symmetry by cropping some off both sides - admittedly, this would make it a non-standard aspect ratio, but I only see that as an issue if you are intending to print, or display a whole series from same place. Well, that's what I'd do.

HTH, Dave

Sorry Dave & John.... it seems i didnt try other crops properly. Yes, I have revised it crop and now looking far better. Here it is . ......

IMG_0447 as Smart Object-1 by Tejal Imagination, on Flickr

[Dave A]

That is much better......nice image.

Dave

[Tejal]

That is much better......nice image.

Dave

Thanks.

[Geoff F]

The closest birds, near the top, are seriously out of focus so I would reluctantly get rid of them.

[Shadowman]

Sorry Dave & John.... it seems i didnt try other crops properly. Yes, I have revised it crop and now looking far better. Here it is . ......

IMG_0447 as Smart Object-1 by Tejal Imagination, on Flickr

Fits quite nicely.

[Tejal]

The closest birds, near the top, are seriously out of focus so I would reluctantly get rid of them.

Thanks for your valuable input . I will revise it.

[Tejal]

Fits quite nicely.

Thanks .

[IzzieK]

Tejal...is it me or my computer is leaning on the left I think....or your shot is leaning on the left, whichever is the cause the last one is a much better edit though it is still leaning towards the left. I cannot comment on the colour yet as my Spyder Studio colour calibration will come next week...picture is busy...

[Tejal]

Tejal...is it me or my computer is leaning on the left I think....or your shot is leaning on the left, whichever is the cause the last one is a much better edit though it is still leaning towards the left. I cannot comment on the colour yet as my Spyder Studio colour calibration will come next week...picture is busy...

thanks a lot for your input.... Even i am feeling something like that. I have some other shots too of same place. I will check those.