Primary Colors Temple. C&C Welcome

[fotugraphy]

Hi, going forward on my photography venture I stopped and clicked another shot. Can you please review it and let me know what exactly is missing for it to make it much better?


It was clicked in Barsana, India in March, 2015. I really like primary colors here.

Please provide your views and suggestion with composition, frame, crops and processing as i'm really confused with the crop. If I crop off the bottom part then it becomes a bit neutral (but i like the cropped version more)

Thank You

PS : Please click on the image for lightbox screen view (Highly recommended)



Cropped Version :

[Wavelength]

Very nice images; i liked the cropped version better

[Dave A]

I prefer the first image because it captures all the orange/red paint the ran down the wall.

Dave

[mknittle]

I am with Dave on this one.It loses a bit in the crop.

[Dave Humphries]

I prefer the first image because it captures all the orange/red paint the ran down the wall.

I tend to agree - in fact I'll go further and suggest a crop (of #1) to remove the column/girder/frame thing on the left and also remove about half of the blank blue wall above the hatch.

[Shadowman]

Nicely done, has the appearance of someone peeking around the curtain.

[bnnrcn]

I prefer #1 , nice colors

[fotugraphy]

Very nice images; i liked the cropped version better

thanks a lot for your kind review

[fotugraphy]

I prefer the first image because it captures all the orange/red paint the ran down the wall.

Dave

thanks a lot for your kind suggestion and review

[fotugraphy]

I am with Dave on this one.It loses a bit in the crop.

thanks a lot for your kind suggestion and review

[fotugraphy]

I tend to agree - in fact I'll go further and suggest a crop (of #1) to remove the column/girder/frame thing on the left and also remove about half of the blank blue wall above the hatch.

Thanks a lot for your kind review and suggestion... The crop is really looking good

[fotugraphy]

Nicely done, has the appearance of someone peeking around the curtain.

haha thanks a lot for your kind valuable review

[fotugraphy]

I prefer #1 , nice colors

thanks a lot for your kind review and appreciation

[Wandjina]

I like them both, but if I had to choose, I would select the first one