I see them

[gregj1763]

I have been exploring some abandoned buildings of late and this shot I took is of the stairwell wall in the Aryton Inn, Nile Tasmania circa 1850's
It is supposedly haunted so I tried to capture that feeling with this edit.
C&C welcome


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[FootLoose]

There are some nice textures in that first image, Greg, but I think the second captures your haunted theme much better. Especially with "help" carved into the concrete.

[gregj1763]

Thanks Greg, It actually has "help us" with the us just slightly above and right, I thought it added an element of desperation to the image

[Shadowman]

Nicely captured.

[NorthernFocus]

Interesting perspective in the first shot. IMO the effect is lost in the second.

[chauncey]

I like the first one...am a bit disappointed that we see no ghosts.

[bnnrcn]

#1 for me too IMO you lost the environment in #2 .

[gregj1763]

Thank you all for your input, looks like another edit is in order

[John 2]

First one for me Greg for the reasons already given.

[IzzieK]

First one for me Greg...that bare bricks with the broken cement covering points very well to your message...if you darken the image as well a little bit the drama would have been complete.

[Wavelength]

i liked them