Lovely shot Dean. Yes I'm a picky so-and-so, but she has a stray hair across her cheek and nose - easy to take out. I think the background /subject are much more balanced in this shot - and the look is great...
Nicely captured.
Dean,
Lovely candid.
I think you could crop away at least half of the background behind the subject that adds nothing to the shot. That would also place her face in a thirds position, which would strengthen the composition.
Robert
She is obviously too thin --- the bones near her shoulder is protruding too much to create a distraction. I think I like your wife better...
The look defiantly makes the shot. Very nice.
Dave
Thanks Ladies & Gents
I wholeheartedly concur with Izziek so there wouldn't be any issues whatsoever Donald