Bags In Window

[mugge]

I spotted this window today. I liked the contrast between the walls and the brightly lit window. I deliberately increased the brightness and the contrast of the window. This is a fancy of mine - shapes and sizes. C&C most welcome.

Bags In Window by Ole Hansen, on Flickr

[Shadowman]

Nice conceptual use of the elements however I think the window suffers in being out shown by exterior surfaces. I'm only speaking in terms of the marketing of the merchandise, aesthetically each of the surfaces are equally visible.

[Geoff F]

Yes, I'm also a bit unsure of this current image. You are certainly well on the way to having a good scene here; possibly just a few minor tweaks

A slight clockwise rotation to put the verticals upright would be a starting point. Then I think I would try a slightly tighter crop; probably lose a bit from the bottom and right side, but only a little.

[joebranko]

Something seems wrong with the verticals. Is the pillar on left of window plumb? Or are my eyes messed up?

[rpcrowe]

I tried correcting the image using the Camera RAW Filter. However, I think that I like the original better...

[Urbanflyer]

I like the image. Don't understand what the second version was trying to accomplish. Agree there is a small problem with the vertical in the 1st version, easily corrected, and increasing the brightness of the window, while dealing with highlights, may help the image overall. 2nd version's crop is less compelling than the original though I agree that some crop on the left may be helpful (not quite as much as your second version.) Well seen!

[Wavelength]

Nice; need a slight clockwise rotation?