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16th January 2021, 05:13 PM
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16th January 2021, 06:50 PM
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Re: Smile
Hi Javier,
Lovely shot of beautiful young woman.
If mine I would crop a fraction off the top edge, not much, less than 5% image height.
The other concerns the capture, I get the impression you were just a little too close to your subject, stepping back a little (if possible) and shooting with a slightly longer focal length, or cropping a bit more 'in post'.
Hope that's helpful,
Dave
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16th January 2021, 10:12 PM
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Re: Smile
Another beautifully taken image, Javier.
+1 to Dave's comments. I would probably crop somewhere close what Dave has suggested.
I find that the light is just a touch "hot" as all of the areas that we often see a bit of reflection; the tip of the nose, the chin and forehead are a bit shiny for my taste. The light on the camera left forearm and chest are a bit too hot for my taste as well. I would burn those areas down just a little. There are strange little hot spots between here eyelids and eyebrows.
We generally try to avoid cropping through the joints in portraiture. The camera right elbow is not causing any real issues, but the camera left one is a bit distracting.
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