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    Dreaming of Yesterday

    Comments welcomed.

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    Re: Dreaming of Yesterday

    Nice picture
    two suggestions
    erase the small round thing at the bottom left handside
    darken a tad the two glasses and the elements under the book.

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    Re: Dreaming of Yesterday

    Thanks for commenting, Jean. I went back to the image to apply your suggestions and changed the coloring. I thought it looked a bit too dark.

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    I like the edit. At first I thought the quill was the wrong colour in the edit but going back and forth I think the warmer colouring is just right in my opinion.
    Cheers Ole

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    Agree with Ole - nicely done.

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    Re: Dreaming of Yesterday

    Terrific final edit.

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    I also agree with Ole. I need to warm up the pen. The image still has a few flaws from my edit that I didn't see until posting. The three dark circles in the lower-left corner. This is a photo of an arrangement I saw at my sister's house. I took the pen out of the ink bottle and laid it as shown for the shot.

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    Re: Dreaming of Yesterday

    I made this shirt for my sister, so when her friends come over, she can wear it and stand next to the arrangement. Dreaming of Yesterday

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