Misty Loch

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15th February 2010, 06:14 AM
john w revie

Misty Loch

We had some nice mist on the loch today

http://files.me.com/jwrevie/6w5hg3

John
15th February 2010, 07:14 AM
Terry Tedor

Re: Misty Loch

Very nice. A little bit more room on the left would be great. If not available, I'd crop just left of the yellowish boat, third from the left. I'd also clone out the cutoff buoys left of center and the one on the right edge.
15th February 2010, 08:36 PM
Dave Humphries

Re: Misty Loch

Hi John,

I agree with everything Terry says, in fact difficult to say it again without copying, so I'll do that. ;)

Quote:

Originally Posted by Terry Tedor

Very nice. A little bit more room on the left would be great. If not available, I'd crop just left of the yellowish boat, third from the left. I'd also clone out the cutoff buoys left of center and the one on the right edge.

Although I think cropping to just the 3 right hand boats would spoil the aspect ratio somewhat.

It is a nice picture though,
15th February 2010, 09:51 PM
Dave Humphries

Re: Misty Loch

I couldn't resist attempting the impossible;

https://www.cambridgeincolour.com/fo...achmentid=2693

but perhaps 100 extra pixels (before downsizing) was 25 too many!

I also did the border a stupid way resulting in more problems than there should be.
15th February 2010, 09:59 PM
Donald

Re: Misty Loch

I like John's original composition. The 'tightness' of the crop conveys, for me, the sense of a busy mooring. And as for the treatment of light and tone - well that is just maginificent. I would go with the clone on the mooring buoys at the bottom and right
16th February 2010, 01:26 PM
rogerb

Re: Misty Loch

Quote:

Originally Posted by Donald

I like John's original composition. The 'tightness' of the crop convey's, for me, the sense of a busy mooring. And as for the treatment of light and tone - well that is just maginificent. I would go with the clone on the mooring buoys at the bottom and right

John: Great mood and lighting. I do think the cropping is too tight on the left. I think Dave's cloning of the buoys is very effective and perhaps only about a third of Dave's added space on the left would help while still keeping a tight composition as Donald suggests.