i like the 3rd one
i like 2 and 3, but nș 2 with more focus and nș 3 with different crop.
Thanks, Sparsh & Gonzalo
Exactly how?Originally Posted by xalupa
The only change I would make in the crop to #3 is to put a little back in at the bottom so you're not cutting off the toes. But only a little bit is needed.
- Bill
The sharpness that you're showing on your bird shots are really great, Abhi. Your composition is also improving. The cropping seems to be too tight but still OK. I am not so sure as to how the two black borders on the top and bottom helps the shots but if that is how you want your images to have frames then it's just fine. I'm seeing a little color cast (yellowish from the sun's cast) that you can correct if you want. I agree with Bill on the 3rd image, I wish you did not crop the toes and you showed the full extent of the tail of the bird for a stronger composition. Still, these are very good shots for me. Great job!
Thanks Bill & Jiro.
& Hey Jiro, Its me.. Sahil
You are so fond of Abhi, it seems
I did crop the third image but not from bottom, that means the bird's toes were out of frame
& Jiro, the yellow cast, I guess, isn't because of the sun, but may be my post processing. I tried giving it a different tone using Curves.
Thanks for the feedback. I will try improving on these two points upon reaching home.
My deepest apologies, Sahil. I am looking at my monitor screen using only my left eye right now. Hahaha! I still got the infection on my right eye. Kindly accept my sincere apologies, Sir.
Sahil,
I love the third shot: composition, bokeh and capture.
Nasseem
I just checked the original picture. The toe is out of frame
Bad composition
Point noted, Captain!