Hello, Ron. What you did is really something creative and unique. Personally, I don't even want to comment on it because this was your artistic idea. However, knowing the basics of what makes a compelling image stronger in its presentation I would like to offer these suggestions if you may.
1. The grainy texture effect on the foreground petals does not seem to agree with the softness of the image. My suggestion would be to get rid of the grain and make the petals look soft.
2. I think the running colors look great on the flowers itself but not on the background (separation of subjects) so I would probably recommend you isolate the effect on the flowers alone and keep the original background colors as one option or make it completely desaturated.
Other than that it is really a very unique way of interpreting colors and flowers. Good work, Man.
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