First Touch . Mother & Son

[windcharm]

First Touch . Mother & Son


Please feel free to comment.

Thank you.

[Donald]

Darren

A lovely idea for an image and one that you have made to work well. A gorgeous intimacy.

A couple of suggestions for you to consider:

• The creation, in post-processing of a catchlight in the child's left eye. At the moment, we can see no detail in that eye
• I feel you have far too much text. It is detracting from the strength of the image. I think one line of text in the border, if you want that, to give the image a title is more than enough. And, do you really need a signature logo in the image? Again, something unobtrusive in the border would suffice.