Normally, when I do people photography, I always provide some extra space on framing my shots. In that way I don't make mistakes of cutting off the hands or the feet when it is not really called for. On #1, #3, #4 and #5 some parts of the individual was cut-off from the frame. You have to watch for that when you compose the shots, Frankie. Also, wait for that extra moment where the expression on the person you are shooting shows it the most. For me, the most promising among the shots you shared here would be #4. She has that nice rim lights on her hair and yet her face was nicely exposed. The expression was really good. My only nit was that the crop was too tight. I think one photography book I have tells that "...when framing a shot with people in it never cut-off a part of their body from the joints." That means, don't cut from the knees, or from the ankle, from the elbows, or from the hips. It should be in-between the joints. Just a suggestion, Frankie. On this type of shots this is where a prime, fast lens would work to the best of your advantage at full open aperture.
