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12th October 2011, 01:57 AM
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Last Boat to Leave the City | Tampa FL
Sony NEX-5K, 1/50sec, F11, 16MM (x1.6)
Very much appreciate any feedback; firmly belief that it isn't practice that makes perfect, it's perfect-practice that makes perfect.
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12th October 2011, 07:55 AM
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Re: Last Boat to Leave the City | Tampa FL
Robert,
Nice image, the crop is a bit too tight on the boat and it could use a bit more contrast.
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12th October 2011, 06:26 PM
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Re: Last Boat to Leave the City | Tampa FL
I think I would be tempted to have just a little more space on the top and bottom as well. Particularly as you have some good reflection there.
And it would look a lot better if that boat was actually going in the opposite direction; into the scene. Or it was closer to the centre and going in the same direction.
As it is, I would be tempted to crop the right edge and forget about the boat.
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12th October 2011, 07:59 PM
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Re: Last Boat to Leave the City | Tampa FL
Thank you, I agree, the boat needs to go. There's no cropping, this is the full shot.
Thanks!
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13th October 2011, 03:08 AM
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Re: Last Boat to Leave the City | Tampa FL
Contrast is just fine...I'd clone the boat out rather than crop the image and...change the title.
I was at a boat show there the day the first Gulf War started...weird, eh?
Last edited by MiniChris; 13th October 2011 at 10:47 AM.
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14th October 2011, 02:20 AM
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Re: Last Boat to Leave the City | Tampa FL
Chris, really appreciate the feedback! Get's more interesting - I'm a military family; father was at Tyndall start of the war -
Last edited by PhotoRob; 14th October 2011 at 02:28 AM.
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