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19th December 2011, 06:53 PM
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19th December 2011, 07:04 PM
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Re: Umbrella
Hi Fernando,
I like the concept of this one but the balance doesn't quite work for me. I think that the boardwalk needs to be in the centre of the frame, and perhaps a tad too much sky for me. The colour of the sky against the umbrella and sand is lovely though.
I really like the silhouettes in the link though, some great work!
Charlie.
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19th December 2011, 07:23 PM
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Re: Umbrella
I agree with Charlie - the colour contrasts are brilliant but the composition itself seems to be a bit unbalanced.
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19th December 2011, 07:59 PM
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Re: Umbrella
I like it, especially the rope shadows on the posts. Very 3-dimensional.
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