Shooping center Heerlen

[Hasselbox]

Foto from a barita foto, First upload. I love strong lines.

[Donald]

I love strong lines.

So do I. Well done, Peter, on posting your first image onto CiC.

You do indeed have strong lines and good, big shapes in that. And the shadow line also provides a very powerful line.

But it is that shadow that is also the biggest challenge with this image. It is further exacerbated by the fact that the shops nearest to us have a canopy that is further darkening the area. I would question whether there is a need for some dodging in the shadow area up to the level of that canopy do that all of the lower shadowed area, inclusing the people, is lightened up a little?

[Hasselbox]

So do I. Well done, Peter, on posting your first image onto CiC.

I would question whether there is a need for some dodging in the shadow area up to the level of that canopy do that all of the lower shadowed area, inclusing the people, is lightened up a little?

Thanks Donald.
After play a littel with de curves. Better so?

[Donald]

After play a littel with de curves. Better so?

I think so.