My daughter and her new Bow.

[jjones2327]

Josh

[Dave Humphries]

Hi Josh,

Pretty good timing there, although compositionally, perhaps shot slightly tighter or wider would be better; this has chopped the ankles and elbow making it look accidentally incomplete.

I'd also like to see more of your shots level - its a problem I am sensitive to because I keep getting it wrong too
It is easily corrected in PP though, as long as you shot with a little extra space around the subject.

You do seem to achieve a good balance of ambient and fill flash in these archery series.

Bows weren't like that when I did archery at school (4 decades ago).

Cheers,

[Goldcoastgolfer]

Nice timing to get that shot. I echo Dave's thoughts - perhaps try a landscape spot so you can catch the full arrow in flight and get all of your daughter in as well. A little bit of negative space on the right might help add to the shot by people wonder what there target is.