Originally Posted by
Nicola
i'm really impressed by your work Bryan, I stayed away from CiC for some time, and I lost your last work
awesome shots, indeed.
I'm not the right person to give you the correct feedback, anyway let me point out what I noted in the last weeks shots. Hope you don't mind, it's only my humble opinion on a few and very minor aspects...
in the last girl portrait on week 42, the burned out reflection catch too much my eyes and distract them from the expressive eyes. in the cormorant portrait, I would like to see more beak in focus and less feathers, a deeper DoF will help too.
in the last two pics (week 44) I think a warmer WB could be an improvement.
cheers
hope this helps
Nicola