Re: Week 26: Coloured Thread
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Letrow
I like your effort Frank and actually in the face it looks quite good. What I notice though is the hands and feet, especially the feet in fact. They look unnatural to me, too pointy or edged I guess. Maybe a bit of smoothing there would have made it more realistic. And the colour of the nails. Now they are in the same colour as the skin.
Ah yes Peter, the nemesis of this image. The left hand doesn't look as bad but both the right hand and the feet still have traces of shiny reflections that I was afraid to modify further for fear of making them look worse with my limited skills. To me it makes them look like they are harsh and resemble the texture of plastic.
I'm not sure how to proceed and didn't find any tutorials on how to make it look more like skin. Does anyone have any ideas?
Re: Week 26: Coloured Thread
I always have ideas, whether or not they are any good... that's up for debate...
Original for comparison:
http://i1088.photobucket.com/albums/...ic/2nqcmf5.jpg
In this one I took selected the hands and feet with the lasso tool, selected replace color, capturing most of the lighter areas, used the color picker for the middle right side of the cheek. Grabbed the dodge and burn tool to give a bit more definition between the toes, fingers, and around the cuticles.
http://i1088.photobucket.com/albums/...FranksDoll.jpg
I took it a step further to mute the warm feeling from the background, colored around the eyes with soft light:
http://i1088.photobucket.com/albums/...ranksDollF.jpg
It was an initial thought....
Ryo
Re: Week 26: Coloured Thread
I think we are moving in the right direction Ryo. Thank you for the suggestions and examples.
It looks to me like we still need to address the reflections a bit more that give the hands and feet a shiny 'plastic' look.
I'm now also thinking that I should have chosen a camera angle that would have her looking directly at the camera but at the time I was trying to shoot for a pleasing background to complement the subject so I was avoiding the painted fireplace hearth as much as I could.
Re: Week 26: Coloured Thread
Hi Frank,
Great picture, the piercing eyes really help with achieving that sense of realism. The vivid colours are really nice too.
I like that we can see a 'before' and 'after' as well. I have often wondered whether to do this to show how little or much I have done to a picture.
Thanks, Rebecca
Re: Week 26: Coloured Thread
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FrankMi
I think we are moving in the right direction Ryo. Thank you for the suggestions and examples.
It looks to me like we still need to address the reflections a bit more that give the hands and feet a shiny 'plastic' look.
Might I suggest a missed step, it would seem to capture your point the edit needs a step to diffuse the light like a real hand would. perhaps a Gaussian or surface blur to give the look and then finely add back in the details on the hand and foot via layer mask.
Ryo
Re: Week 26: Coloured Thread
Hi Frank,
This is an interesting challenge you set yourself!
I like what you did here, but think (not exactly unprompted by the above posts), that you missed the necessary final step of "painting in" the details like finger and toe nails, etc. The eyes have obviously had some time spent on them, but I'm not sure the whites are bright enough.
I also wonder, at the expense of more time and effort, whether some texture could be masked in to address the 'smooth edges' look that Peter was touching upon.
btw, I never said, but I thought the slot machines were very well done - you have a knack when it comes to selecting a reapeating pattern that some how makes it look natural and yet isn't overly long (not sure if I'm making sense) - I guess I mean you can't "see the join" in the loop.
Cheers,
Re: Week 26: Coloured Thread
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beckyhumphries
I like that we can see a 'before' and 'after' as well. I have often wondered whether to do this to show how little or much I have done to a picture.
Thank you Becky!
I have found that when I show the before and after, I really open myself up for C&C as folks can better grasp what I am trying to accomplish and the methods I am using. It also seems to prompt more detailed feedback and sometimes examples as well.
I have gotten some great help when folks have something besides the final result to think about.
Now I just need a quiet time to practice what I have been taught and either post the results or ask clarifying questions. http://i292.photobucket.com/albums/m...eed_coffee.gif
Re: Week 26: Coloured Thread
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Ryogenetic
Might I suggest a missed step, it would seem to capture your point the edit needs a step to diffuse the light like a real hand would. perhaps a Gaussian or surface blur to give the look and then finely add back in the details on the hand and foot via layer mask.
Ryo
I'll give that a try, it can't be all that hard can it? Can it? LOL!
Re: Week 26: Coloured Thread
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Dave Humphries
This is an interesting challenge you set yourself!
Wouldn't be much fun without a challenge, would it?
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Dave Humphries
I like what you did here, but think (not exactly unprompted by the above posts), that you missed the necessary final step of "painting in" the details like finger and toe nails, etc. The eyes have obviously had some time spent on them, but I'm not sure the whites are bright enough.
I also wonder, at the expense of more time and effort, whether some texture could be masked in to address the 'smooth edges' look that Peter was touching upon.
Thanks for the observation on the eye whites Dave. Sometimes I miss the obvious! To err is human but it is best to not become 'super-human'. LOL!
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Dave Humphries
btw, I never said, but I thought the slot machines were very well done - you have a knack when it comes to selecting a reapeating pattern that some how makes it look natural and yet isn't overly long (not sure if I'm making sense) - I guess I mean you can't "see the join" in the loop.
I'm finding that a simple 8-step loop works best and keeps the file size down. Glad you noticed. It just didn't feel right without some 'action'.