I like it! Nice color and shape and the black background suits it very well!
Nice contrasting colours - great capture
Hi Kris, Nice colour in the flower, stands out well against the black background, perhaps a different angle would show more of the flower, eg have the flower falling towards you rather than away, just a thought
Week 4:
Experimenting with Long Exposure:
With 20/20 hindsight, I should have cleaned up the bottom of the fountain.
Exif:
DateTime - 2012:01:23 20:10:19
ExposureTime - 30 seconds
FNumber - 16
ExposureProgram - Shutter priority
ISOSpeedRatings - 400
SubjectDistance - 0.67 m
MeteringMode - Center weighted average
LightSource - Auto
Flash - Not fired
FocalLength - 18.00 mm
ColorSpace - sRGB
ExifImageWidth - 1036
ExifImageHeight - 1200
SceneType - A directly photographed image
CustomRendered - Custom process
ExposureMode - Auto
White Balance - Auto
FocalLengthIn35mmFilm - 27 mm
Last edited by Kris V; 24th January 2012 at 01:15 PM.
Yep, I see what you mean Kris. Although if the sole purpose was experimentation with 30s-long exposure, then that's not too important. It's what you learn from doing the experiment that's important.
One other bit of learning that's maybe available from it, is perhaps about the need to sort out distortion and get it looking straight. Everything's got a distinct lean to the left. Maybe that needs a bit of work on it?
I'm guessing the yellowish tint is due to incandescent lighting? If so, you might want to play with the white balance to see if you like better with the cooler coloring.
Used your image as a teaching model to see how far we could take this image, yet keep the essence of Kris's original intent.
Did a rotation, clockwise (and quite significantly to get the lean out), addeded a B&W layer where the colors were intensified in some areas, reduced significantly in other areas. Added a contrast layer, two exposure layers where areas were reduced or enhanced in the whites and blacks. Flatytened those layers then filed in the areas left from the rotation, either with a fill color or clone, used the adjustments layer of "Replace Color" to get rid of all the background oranges and reds...used the quick selection tool to isolate the pots and water. Several blanks layers were used to create shadows and lower the brightness of the foreground.
Last edited by MiniChris; 24th January 2012 at 02:59 PM.
Cool! (Now you can really see the mud spatters)!!!
PS - Did my bunny run away?
Last edited by Kris V; 24th January 2012 at 03:01 PM.
Love the photo!
The bunny wasn't doing anything for the shot, so he had to go to bunny clone heaven. Rather than try to clone out the mud splatters, I used them as textural qualities to add to the overall grittiness of the image. This was just me trying to get some budding photogrphy students thinking in different modalities. Thank you for treating the edits as beneficial to your photographic growth. Perhaps it will show them that they too can participate in critiquing and commenting on other's works.
Hi Kris! I really like your last edit. To me, the colors are more realistic. Although there are probably additional changes you could make, you are definitely heading in the right direction for my sense of what looks like I would expect to see!
Thanks all for the feedback and encouragement!
What would I do without CiC!!!!
Week 5:
Didn't get a chance to go out shooting this week - Flu bug got me.
So, I decided to play around with the copy of DXO optics that I got from my son-in-law.
I'm waayy out of my comfort zone, since I never used this software before, but since I really had nothing better to do than hang around feeling miserable, I decided to get a feel for it. (Donald, Got some pointers for me?).
After I few hits and misses, I decided I could start to like it, as long as I have PS CS5 as a crutch.....
This picture was taken a few weeks ago - processed in both ACR
and I used DXO for a B/W conversion.