For me i think a little bit of brightness at the bottom of the stem and you've got a real winner. But more importantly - what do you think?
For me, Kris, that is a difficult angle to get looking good in B&W.
There is too much which is poorly focused, although not your fault, which I find distracting. In particular the rather long stem.
After holding a piece of card against the screen, on the left side, I think that cropping to reduce the stem length tends to increase the interest of the flower. Reducing that distance by around half, or a little more seems about right.
But that means changing the width/height ratio.
I think that's the crux of it. But, sometimes, there's only one way to find out.
I'm not sure that there were enough well-defined lines and shapes to make it a strong candidate for B & W. It feels like one in which colour was an important element and needed to be retained (as you have in your original).
I think Geoff sums it up very well in saying, "... that is a difficult angle to get looking good in B&W."
Thanks all for the feedback.
I'm almost ready to post week 8 - hopefully tomorrow.
That works Nice and sharp with some nice lighting. I didn't even realise that Aloe plants had flowers!
Hi Kris: nice shot, but don't you wish it would have landed somewhere else? Brings back memories of last year in the backyard chasing butterflies around. It'll soon be time to start that again. This year I hope to have more flowers that are supposed to be butterfly magnets.
Anyway, I'm not sure but I think it might be a Zebra Swallowtail.
http://www.enchantedlearning.com/sub.../Zebrasw.shtml
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Protographium_marcellus
Frank's got a good point - whenever I take photos of bugs these days I've got my speedlight on with the wide angle diffuser in place. It allows me to stop down the aperture, crank up the shutter speed, and still get everything perfectly lit and sharp. That's my secret to taking bugs. Have you got a speedlight you can use?
Hi Kris, the image has so much going for it, great colour, DOF is great, composition, but the sun/shadow makes for a difficult shot, as Mal said a flash would make a difference or perhaps a different time of day, or even cut off and place in better light. you have to get rid of them anyway
Mushrooms can be surprisingly difficult to photograph well.
I know that I have shot from every angle I could find; and ended up with just one acceptable keeper. And usually from an angle which I didn't expect to work.
An ant on #2 as a bonus I see.
I think I'd struggle to take a great photo of a mushroom. Did you have a vision of how you wanted to capture it or were just experimenting?