Hi Liz,
The exposure seems reasonably ok, but I believe both horizons are tilted - I appreciate given the strom that might be difficult to see through the viewfinder and wonder if a hotshoe level might help.
The most striking thing though is the lack of dynamic range in both pictures, they look dull and flat, possibly because these are SOOC and unprocessed RAW conversions or jpgs?
Here's the histogram (using the
Histogram Viewer 1.7 Plug-in for Firefox);
Note how it is all in the middle and the "Max" and "Min" figures are nowhere near 255 or 0?
I do appreciate this may have been your artistic choice; to give a moody feel to the images, in which case, please ignore me.
Hope that helps,