Hi Russell
I like the scene and I think the composition is good. The only thing is I think it looks a bit "washed out". I fiddled with it in PS a bit and came up with this. I hope you don't mind - it may not be the look you were after. Adjusted the mid range level, increased saturation a bit and added a bit of sharpening.
Dave
I must say I've learned something about the power of post-processing by studying Dave's edit. That's an amazing rebirth of the original.