1st time attempt at light streaks

[damien]

Ok this was my first attemp, What do you think i could have done better ?

[Dave Humphries]

Ok this was my first attemp, What do you think i could have done better ?

Hi Damien,

Based upon the pylon leaning, I think it needs a slight clockwise rotation to get it level (or should I say vertical).

Other than that you have done very well;
the sky is still light enough
the composition is good (you could possibly lose 10% on the right hand side and not miss it though)
the WB is good
I like the starlight

EXIF data = Nikon D80, 11mm, 27.6 sec at f/3.5 and iso 400

Well done,

[Ahmed Shahat]

Hello Damien,

Very strong starting..

Good Luck..