The Wilsons

[mammarazzi]

Megan and Aiden

[Dizzy]

Joanne, I think they are both excellent shots, with my preference for the top one
due to the expression in her eyes. Only minor issue, but there seems to be several
vertical lines rising up from her knuckles that are a bit distracting.

Mike

[Dave Humphries]

Hi Joanne,

My thoughts are;
#1, I am distracted by the blurred background highlight which is to the left of Megan's hand, I'd clone the background above down into the corner IIWY (hey, I made a new TLA) = if I were you.
#2, In an ideal world (although it may have changed Aiden's expression), I'd prefer this shot from his eye level, the bricks in the wall show an obvious (admittedly small) downward angle. The brightly lit left collar and neck also pulls the eye to the edge of frame, just a bit of burning required.

Please do bear in mind that;
you have far more people shooting experience than I,
my results wouldn't have been this good, plus
we're talking of changes that make <5% difference to the outcome, you're already nearly there (and far more advanced than I am)

Cheers,