Wire Wool

[mammarazzi]

[Donald]

I think this is a wonderfully seen and imagined image.

For me it doesn't quite 'buzz' as it is and I've spent most of the day trying to think why. Just came back to it now and had the notion that we don't need that barb at the right hand side. As it stands the central subject is just that - central.

If it was cropped to the right of that to perhaps give us a 5:4 ratio format, that which is in the centre at the moment, would be moved over off-centre towards the right. That would mean that wisp of wool trailing at the bottom would go out of the frame on the right. But I think that would be okay.