Kenny, I think the exposures look good. If you are like me, when you are trying something new, you tend to lose attention on other things though
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The overall composition doesn't work for me either. If the gazebo is an important part of the photo, I would try choosing a lower perspective so that you can get the woman and the gazebo more side by side than stacked on top of each other.
Colin, asymmetric vignettes - do tell how to make them! I guess I google it or search it on youtube, but that's not as much fun.