My daughter Amy

[owenmorris]

[Dave Humphries]

Hi Owen,

I'm not a portraitist, but here's what I see;

Good focus and DoF
Good exposure
Perhaps a tad over saturated and/or WB a little too red
The logo on her red top needs to be cloned out - or crop about 10 pixels off right hand side
There's a green halo around her hair against the window caused by the over exposure there - I'd deal with that by zooming right in (e.g. 300%) and using a fine desaturate brush on just the green halo

Still a nice picture though.

Hope that helps,

[speedneeder]

The color balance looks slightly off to me. Was this shot in AWB?

I would bump up the contrast a little bit.
I like the idea of bracketing around face with the door/window in the background, though the brightness of it may be a bit too much. You could also add a vignette, those seam to be popular these days