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Thread: Natural Light, My Garage
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29th April 2012, 02:48 AM #1
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Natural Light, My Garage
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29th April 2012, 02:50 AM #2
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Re: Natural Light, My Garage
Any critiques would be appreciated::
Mitch
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29th April 2012, 03:06 AM #3
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Re: Natural Light, My Garage
Mitch...
I can see what you are tryng for but, there are a couple of things that are a bit problematic...
The background is very busy and tends to compete with the subject...
The clothing also competes with the subjects face for my attention...
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29th April 2012, 03:52 AM #4
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Re: Natural Light, My Garage
The face and hair on the forehead are blurry however her shirt which appears to be on the same plane is sharper. She looks to have been moving her head and the 1/30 a bit slow for it. I agree with Richard about the background. Outside may have given you a faster shutter speed and an option on a better background.
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29th April 2012, 05:09 AM #5
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Re: Natural Light, My Garage
Thank you so much, I do see ..
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29th April 2012, 06:51 AM #6
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Re: Natural Light, My Garage
Hi Mitch,
Just to show you what others are commenting on. I've ...
- Sharpened the image
- De-emphasized the areas that we don't want to draw the eye to
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