My daughter

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I just downloaded the free trial version of LightRoom4-on my brand new computer!! Woohoo KZmami is coming up in the world- hehe
...a new camera is on the list!
but for now -would love some feedback on this image- pp
Thank YOu,
Krisztina
Taken with my ps canon s-95

[speedneeder]

Hi Krisztina,
The photo looks fun to me, always glad to see people who are genuinely enjoying themselves
As far as PP goes, the whites seems overly white to me, personal taste I know as many like this look. I think it is a fine line between whitening and over-whitening! I like the crop. I find myself wishing she was looking at the camera. I don't know if it's the light or the distance vs focal length that makes me think the nose is exaggerated? The file is a little too small for to me to make much conclusion on PP. Overall I think it's a cute pic.
Thanks for posting

[Captured]

Hi Krisztina,
The photo looks fun to me, always glad to see people who are genuinely enjoying themselves
As far as PP goes, the whites seems overly white to me, personal taste I know as many like this look. I think it is a fine line between whitening and over-whitening! I like the crop. I find myself wishing she was looking at the camera. I don't know if it's the light or the distance vs focal length that makes me think the nose is exaggerated? The file is a little too small for to me to make much conclusion on PP. Overall I think it's a cute pic.
Thanks for posting

Thank you for your feedback. really appreciate it. I'll work on the whiteness Here is the original file

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and here is another fun one

[speedneeder]

Love that pose!

What do you think of the whitening in the first image? I get the feeling I'm pretty conservative in that regard.

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All her!

[BJ Denning]

and here is another fun one

Love this one. Wish it was a little bigger. It is fun and free and makes me long for the days you can go out and lay in the grass and just be. Also love the lines the grass blades make. All around perfect.