First thing, Bruce, is that you may find it better, when you post a second version of an image already posted, to keep it in the same thread. That way, people are able to easily compare and contrast When you put in 'Barnsley Gardens revised', folks obviously know there was an earlier version, but without any link to it they won't know where to find it.
So, for the benefit of those folk, here is that link.
And I do think this is a much stronger image. What is your own view?
Hi Bruce,
much better. Well done.