Vase of Flowers - feedback please

[phaedin]

Just some flowers at home.

Trying to work on my composition, shot it in JPEG + RAW so i will include the camera version and my tweeked version
I tried a preset (vivid) to try and make the colours pop a bit more and make the flowers stand out.

Also trying to work on my depth of field to try and isolate the flowers

(these are full sized images)

http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8152/7...bd97d75b_m.jpg


now the camera version uncropped

http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7232/7...8e1de42f_m.jpg



Hopefully the EXFIL data shows up if not then focal length 18.0mm F3.5 1/60sec

any Comments or feed back will be much appreciated

Thanks

Mike

[phaedin]

Sorry for the Double post - please delete this