Jiro, I like this image quite a bit. I like the way the two subjects repeat their position of holding the hats, especially because their T-shirts also repeat.
I wonder if it might not place more emphasis on the repetition by cropping out the figure with the camera at the right of the image?
Thanks, Richard. I decided to keep the other person on the right to create tension on the composition. It would be too static for me because of the the repeated similarities of the two on the left so I kept the other for contrast. I learned the concept from studying some cinematography books lately.