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Thread: Heading for the Lake
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3rd September 2012, 07:55 PM #1
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Heading for the Lake
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3rd September 2012, 07:58 PM #2
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Re: Heading for the Lake
Tim I cant see any image on my computer.
Dave
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3rd September 2012, 08:03 PM #3
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Re: Heading for the Lake
Yeah I did somthing wrong....
Originally Posted by dje
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3rd September 2012, 09:21 PM #4
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Re: Heading for the Lake
Tim technically the image looks good - focus, DOF, clarity and exposure are all fine. I would probably reduce the highlights a bit if you have suitable pp software to tone down the decking and sky which looks a little bright to me.
The composition certainly emphasises the length and lines of the walkway. However I wonder how it would have worked if the shot were taken closer to the lake so that you got a sense of the walkway actually leading you to something interesting. As it is you can only see a small patch of water at the end.
Just my thoughts, others may differ !!
Dave
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3rd September 2012, 09:49 PM #5
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Re: Heading for the Lake
Hi Tim,
Very nice picture. I agree with Dave - you should try to reduce the highlights a little, mostly on the wet bridge. Have you tried to straighten the horizon? The shot works fine as is, just curious what it would look like straighter.
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