It is a nice clear shot Irina but I would love to have seen more of the background, to put him in context with his wares..the hussle and bustle of the market life..
Hi Irina
I think it captures the essence of him as a trader, I hope this is what you were trying to achieve ? A good idea to offer a picture back by email.
A good simple shot of a market trader, I can think of a huge amount that would say no to a photo.
B&W adds to the shot I think
Andy
Hi Irina,
Welcome to the CiC forums from me.
If mine; I would correct the under exposure in PP (Post Processing), which would help Sharon see more background too.
I think I'd also crop a little, just 5%, off the right side, there a bit too much white wall and the little metal bracket in lower right corner distracts me.
Hope that helps,
Thank you all for the helpful comments!
I realize (yet again...) that my screen is not calibrated properly (the shot doesn't look underexposed). Probably need to do something with it.
I agree it would be more interesting to capture also his merchandise, it was a bit difficult to do since it was behind a dirty glass. I guess I had to find a better angle. Next time.
Hi Irina,
You could try adjusting the brightness and contrast of your screen by reference to some "known good" content, typically a test chart, have a look at the "ADJUSTING BRIGHTNESS & CONTRAST" section in this tutorial here at CiC. All screens and monitors are delivered set way too bright.
The only word of caution is if you are using a laptop, the vertical viewing angle makes a vast difference to these things, so you must be careful to always sit with the screen angled correctly to your eyes, this should be perpendicular (right angles) - if a shiny screen and you face is lit, so you can see your reflection - which raises one other thing; ambient light; if you have a shiny screen, you don't want your face to be unduly lit by anything, it is better to view in a room with subdued light levels.
Even if you don't do any of that, a quick look at the histogram (in your image editing program) will show the image's brightness and allow you to avoid posting images with a large blank area on the right like this;
Cheers,
Last edited by Dave Humphries; 9th September 2012 at 01:33 AM.
Hi Dave,
Thanks for the detailed explanation, I forgot to look at the histogram...
I'll definitely work through the tutorial!
Cheers,
Irina