New Person Requesting Input on Photo

[greenguy]

Hi all,
I'm relatively new to the forum, and loving all of the valuable info that is available here. After having read through all the tutorials (and more) I've put a few things into practice. Please take a look at this photo and provide me with any constructive feedback you may have.

Thanks,
Steve

Here is the link to the photo: https://dl.dropbox.com/u/70641371/IMG_3319.jpg

[dubaiphil]

Or the other option would be to provide a hair light, back right, to separate the model from the background a little

[greenguy]

Andrew and Phil, Thanks for the input. I looked at the photography (this time on my PC) and you're right, the eyes are a bit soft (everything looks nice and sharp on my Macbook - grin). I have two lights on the way, and plan to use my existing light to do just what you suggested. Although I intended to fade her head into the darkness on this shot, I want more options.

Gentlemen, thanks again for your input!

[KCBrecks]

There is just one question I think you should ask - Does She like it? Nothing else really matters.